A Life's Journey

On the first day of life,
We were as fragile as a fly,
Being cared for by a smile
Of a bright and joyful kind


On the second time of growth,
We were crawling on the ground
At least we weigh more than a pound,
He who did not even know "clown"


In our very third stop,
We were riding a sled
Not noticing the clock,
Until it was time for bed


Of the fourth step of life,
Chaos was unleashed everywhere
From the watch from the wife,
'Till the bottom of the dare


In the fifth time of life
Were interested in weird things,
From the style of our music
To the clinging cell phone rings


On our sixth stage of ascending
We had our first celebration
Of an eighteen year old party
And saw a man of temptation


On the seventh step of success
Love was in the winding air
Not feeling a pinch of distress
As we got a ring from a heir


On the eighth day of happiness
A beautiful sight was born
Sprinkles of smiles were formed
From the face of innocence


On the ninth day of life
Everything was fine
Nothing to suffer
And lived a happily ever after

If I'm getting this right..


1: Birth
2: Baby
3: Childhood
4: Uh.. IDK, Rebellion maybe?
5: Teenager
6: Young man
7: Love
8: Children
9: Nothin

Am I right? O_O
Anyway, keep it up! It's great!

I don't know how to explain # 4, well there come a time in your childhood days when you don't listen to your parents and act as the black sheep int the, a least, that's what happens here XD

# 9 ends the poem

and you got the rest correctly XD

Asuka-san08 wrote:

I don't know how to explain # 4, well there come a time in your childhood days when you don't listen to your parents and act as the black sheep int the, a least, that's what happens here XD

# 9 ends the poem

and you got the rest correctly XD

Well, the fourth one isn't really that easy to figure out.
BTW eighth and ninth says 'day', not 'step' or 'stage'

Not sure if on purpose, or just plain #4

haha, I'm not perfect and I make a LOT of mistakes

Since you wrote day... =O DOES THAT MEAN WE HAVE KIDS WHEN WE'RE 8 DAYS OLD???

OMG, so sorry, I didn't mean 'day' literally xD